Well a short poem...

OK this was one of those poems i wrote rather bad....

Rate this poem plz on scale of 1-10


Aren’t You Beautiful?


Hey,

Who are you? Stealth my heart out of nowhere,

Your fragrance enchants me to death.

Are You Pure Poison?

Sweet at first,

Death at last.



Or are Curses hidden in you-

To spellbound the Heavens

You are death by prescription.

Elixir of life is with you.

The Enigma,

The Temptation,

The Attraction.



None know of your beauty,

The Beauty,

The Charm,

The Secret.



You hyper indulgences to degrees unheard.

You redefine passion, lust and love.

Aren’t you beautiful?

-Sour

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